[RE-IELTS] Writing 1 – Topic: Tele working
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In the past, many people used to travel to their place of work. With increased use of computers, the internet and smart phones, more and more people are starting to work from home. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
In recent years, an increasing number of workers choose to telework instead of traveling to their offices by using communication technology. In this essay, I will discuss both the positive and negative aspects of this growing development.
The most significant advantages of working from home is that workers would have a sense of flexibility and comfort. For example, they can perform the task and take a break at any time and anywhere they like. This would therefore mean that workers could arrange their own work timetable. Another pronounced advantage is that people have ability to live far from their work place. For instance, some developers from Vietnam can work for companies in New York without going to the work place daily. Also, workers can have the possibility to do something, such as household chores or cooking meals.
In contrast, there are several disadvantages to workers home working. One of the most salient negatives of working from home is that people will suffer the lack of discipline. Their work time table which coule be changed every day, relies on their behavior. One additional disadvantage is that they may lack sociable activities, they would spend most of their time working or relaxing, the ultimate disadvantage is that they can not discuss any problem directly with their colleagues.
In conclusion, communication technology is a promising tool that change the current picture of work and employment in an advantageous way. However, teleworking should be used with extreme caution to avoid detrimental effects it may have on workers and society as a whole.